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Nocturne

Thomas MacGreevy

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Diplomatic editions of MacGreevy's poetry were created from Collected Poems of Thomas MacGreevy: An Annotated Edition, edited by Susan Schreibman (Anna Livia Press and The Catholic University of America Press, 1991). Images of MacGreevy's published poems were taken from MacGreevy's own copy of Poems (Heinemann, 1934). Manuscript copies are from MacGreevy's papers at Trinity College, Dublin (individual manuscript numbers appear in the Witness Details below).

Witness a1: 'Nocturne, Saint Eloi, 1918' (TCD 7878/1/2) ()
Witness a2: 'Nocturne of St. Eloi, 1918' (TCD MS 7989/1/3) ()
Witness a3: 'Nocturne, Saint Eloi' (TCD MS 79891/1) ()
Witness pub: This poem was published in Poems as 'Nocturne' ()

Textual Notes: critical:There are three TS versions of this poem entitled 'Nocturne, Saint Eloi, 1918'. It was published as 'Nocturne, Saint Eloi, 1929' in The Irish Statesman, II:4 (28 September 1929) 69, under the pseudonym L. Saint Senan (See 'Saint Senan's Well'). 'Nocturne' was written in late 1928 or early 1929. To the editor's knowledge, it has not been reprinted.

biographical:During World War I, MacGreevy served for twenty-two months as a second lieutenant in the Royal Field Artillery, spending most of that time in the front line of the Somme (after the war he was promoted to the rank of lieutenant). In France he was wounded twice, the second time (September 1918) more seriously at Commines, where he received a shoulder wound.

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Electronic Edition Information
Text Encoding by Susan Schreibman and Jarom McDonald.
Proofing and additional Encoding by Lara Vetter
Annotations by Susan Schreibman

Published by Susan Schreibman
Maryland Institute for Technology in the Humanities (MITH), University of Maryland, College Park, MD 20742

Thomas MacGreevy's poetry is reprinted here with the kind permission of Margaret Farrington and Elizabeth Ryan. Permission to reproduce images of Thomas MacGreevy's manuscripts has been generously granted by The Board of Trinity College Dublin.

This poem and manuscript drafts are available from this site for demonstration purposes only. They may not be reproduced without explicit permission from the copyright holder. For copyright information, please contact Susan Schreibman at ss423@umail.umd.edu


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View ImagesView ImagesView ImagesView Images Nocturne, St. Eloi, 1918. c

Saint Eloi, one of the most popular Saints of the Middle Ages, founded a monastery near the present village of Mont St. Eloi, five miles northwest of the city of Arras in northern France. The ruins of the monastery remain, and in 1917-18 were close to the Western Front. There is also a British Military Cemetery nearby.

Eloi may also be a reference to the words of Christ on the cross: 'Eloi, Eloi, lamma sabacthani? . . . My God, my God, why hast thou forsaken me?' (Mark 15:34-5).


NOCTURNE OF ST. ELOI, 1918 Weeds of virtue The Widowed Virtue c

Saint Eloi, one of the most popular Saints of the Middle Ages, founded a monastery near the present village of Mont St. Eloi, five miles northwest of the city of Arras in northern France. The ruins of the monastery remain, and in 1917-18 were close to the Western Front. There is also a British Military Cemetery nearby.

Eloi may also be a reference to the words of Christ on the cross: 'Eloi, Eloi, lamma sabacthani? . . . My God, my God, why hast thou forsaken me?' (Mark 15:34-5).


NOCTURNE, SAINT ELOI c

Saint Eloi, one of the most popular Saints of the Middle Ages, founded a monastery near the present village of Mont St. Eloi, five miles northwest of the city of Arras in northern France. The ruins of the monastery remain, and in 1917-18 were close to the Western Front. There is also a British Military Cemetery nearby.

Eloi may also be a reference to the words of Christ on the cross: 'Eloi, Eloi, lamma sabacthani? . . . My God, my God, why hast thou forsaken me?' (Mark 15:34-5).


NOCTURNE c

Saint Eloi, one of the most popular Saints of the Middle Ages, founded a monastery near the present village of Mont St. Eloi, five miles northwest of the city of Arras in northern France. The ruins of the monastery remain, and in 1917-18 were close to the Western Front. There is also a British Military Cemetery nearby.

Eloi may also be a reference to the words of Christ on the cross: 'Eloi, Eloi, lamma sabacthani? . . . My God, my God, why hast thou forsaken me?' (Mark 15:34-5).





To the memory of [?] Geoffrey
England Taylor, 2nd Lieutenant, R.F.A.,
died of wounds received in action, in
France, September, 26, 1918. b

Geoffrey England Taylor, a fellow cadet at the training academy at Bloomsbury in London, was MacGreevy's closest friend during the war. Both men were drafted to the same division in France. MacGreevy was assigned to guns, Taylor to trench mortars: 'the greatest misfortune that could befall a gunner-officer. Trench mortars were regarded with horror . . . [they were] a suicide club.'

While MacGreevy was recovering from his shoulder wound in Manchester, he found Taylor's name in the Died of Wounds section of the Casualty List. The death of Geoffrey Taylor, 'one of the most sensitively gentle' of men, represented to MacGreevy the worst horror of war: the destruction of 'life's hopes and dreams'; 'intelligence and beauty'. Memoirs, pp. 318-19.


To Geoffrey England Taylor, 2nd Lieutenant, R.F.A.,
"Died of wounds" . b

Geoffrey England Taylor, a fellow cadet at the training academy at Bloomsbury in London, was MacGreevy's closest friend during the war. Both men were drafted to the same division in France. MacGreevy was assigned to guns, Taylor to trench mortars: 'the greatest misfortune that could befall a gunner-officer. Trench mortars were regarded with horror . . . [they were] a suicide club.'

While MacGreevy was recovering from his shoulder wound in Manchester, he found Taylor's name in the Died of Wounds section of the Casualty List. The death of Geoffrey Taylor, 'one of the most sensitively gentle' of men, represented to MacGreevy the worst horror of war: the destruction of 'life's hopes and dreams'; 'intelligence and beauty'. Memoirs, pp. 318-19.



1 I labour in a barren place,
1 I labour in a barren place,
1 I labour in a barren place,
1 I labour in a barren place,
2 Afraid, aware, little blundering , lonely thing:
2 Alone, self-conscious, frightened, blundering;
2 Alone, self-conscious, frightened, blundering;
2 Alone, self-conscious, frightened, blundering;
3 Far away, stars wheeling on through space.
3 Above me , Far away stars wheeling in space,
3 Far above, stars wheeling in space,
3 Far away, stars wheeling in space,
4 About my feet, earth voices whispering.
4 About my feet, earth voices whispering. . . .
4 About my feet, earth voices whispering. . . .
4 About my feet, earth voices whispering.
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